Dawn+Long's+Feedback

=__//Thanks for your comments!!//__= I really like the way you used the blog in your unit. This is a great tool to get students involved in discussion, especially those who do not like to speak out in class. Very detailed rubric || Judy, your unit plan is very organized and comprehensive. Bringing in community members is a terrific way to connect the learning environment with the outside world. || Fantasy is such a hot topic with middle schoolers! I can imagine that they can get extremely enthused about this reading, especially those that seem to be rather on the "fringe" of the average middle school student. Your document to support student learning looks incredibly helpful. || I enjoyed your presentation immensely. I liked how you dealt with the challenge of incorporating both your language arts and literature sections. It seems to me that you have covered all of the gaps that might exist as a result of having the students working on two different sets of curriculum. It seems as though you have used your blog effectively, and I hope that your students utilize it as you have planned. Overall, I think the strengths of this unit lie mainly in your thorough covering of all of your vocabulary and tasks as well as clear and systematic scope and sequence of activities in the unit. || I love the idea of teaching students to evaluate the quality of thier reading selections. It seems like this project may motivate some students who are not usually interested in what is going on in class. ||
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 * Marlowe || My feedback is... fun unit! This topic is such an important genre for grade level middle school students. Love the organization. Let me know how it works. ||
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 * Florence || I really liked the detail of your rubric. Including the literary elements in the rubric really help students to focus on what you have identified as important. I also liked the way you set up your blog by the week. I think your students will really enjoy blogging since that is really the "in" thing to be doing. What a great way to get your students motivated! ||
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 * Lykes || My feedback is...I like the way you use the Blog and the Story Map ||
 * McMillen || My feedback is...Dawn, I really appreciated the scaffolding document in your unit plan. I think it is a good aid without limiting the students' creativity. I like that you provide many options for your students instead of demanding that every student read the same book. ||
 * Sarracino || My feedback is dude!!!!! I like the blog questions with the separation by weeks. That will be useful to me, too. I had another comment, but with all of this confusion, I have lost it. :( ||
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